1.
Schools should reward top students who have highest score. 解释：最高级前面需要冠词 the
改： Schools should reward top students who have the highest score.
2. If they spend too much time on housework, they may not have enough time to do their work, in that
case, they may perform poorly in the workplace. 解释：独立的句子之间相连，需要有连词。
改： If they spend too much time on housework, they may not have enough time to do their work, and in that
case, they may perform poorly in the workplace.
3. We encourage men to share housework with women, it does not mean that housework should be
allocated to husband and wife equally.
解释：独立的句子之间相连，需要有连词。
改 ： We encourage men to share housework with women, but it does not mean that housework should be
allocated to husband and wife equally.
4.
There are an increasing number of people choose to spend holidays overseas. 解释： there be 句型本
身就是完整的句子，不能再出现其它谓语动 词，需要使用定语从句或者分词来修饰名词 people 改： There are an increasing number of people who choose to spend holidays overseas. 改： There are an
increasing number of people choosing to holidays overseas.
spend
5.
The percentage of people traveled by bike or on foot decreased significantly. 解释：句子里面不能出
现两个谓语动词 travelled 和 decreased ，如 果有两个谓语动词，可以做成从句，或者使用分词。 改： The percentage of people who traveled by bike or on foot decreased significantly.
改 ： The percentage of people travelling by bike or on foot decreased significantly.
6. Comparing with fossil fuels, nuclear power can provide more energy and it does not produce carbon
dioxide.
改： Compared with fossil fuels, nuclear power can provide more energy and it does not produce carbon
dioxide. 7.
For those students who do not have self-control probably will mimic those wrong behavior from TV programs.
解释：加了 for 以后变成了介词短语，变成了句子的状语，导致这句 话没有了主语。介词短语不能作为句子主语。
改： Those students who do not have self-control probably will mimic those wrong behavior from TV
programs.
8. If the household tasks could be divided according to the family's situation would be better.
解释：有一个条件状语从句，主句却没有主语。
改： If the household tasks could be divided according to the family's situation, it would be better.
9.
Parents buy a large quantity of toys may distract children from their study. 解释：不能拿一个句子去
当另一个句子的主语。
改： If parents buy a large quantity of toys, it may distract children from their study.
10. Some scenic spots are so popular that every year the number of tourists who accommodate exceeds their real capacity.
解释： accommodate 是“接待”和“容纳”，这个词的主语应该是旅游景 点 scenic spots ，而不是游客。所以加了个 they ，这个 they 表示 scenic spots 改： Some scenic spots are so popular that every year the
number of tourists who they accommodate exceeds their real capacity.
11. The time which spends in watching TV should be controlled strictly. 解释：定语从句的主语 which ，
指代 time ，时间“被花在看电视上”， 是被动语态。或者干脆把定语从句修饰 time 改成过去分词修饰
time 改： The time which is spent in watching TV should be controlled strictly.
改： The time spent in watching TV should be controlled strictly.
12. Using fossil fuels will produce carbon dioxide, which is a kind of greenhouse gas causes global warming.
解释：定语从句里面出现了两个谓语：
greenhouse gas that causes global warming.
is和cause，所以后面用了定
语从句 that 来修饰 greenhouse gas 改： Using fossil fuels will produce carbon dioxide, which is a kind of
13. Many young people move from rural areas to cities, which there are more educational resources and job opportunities.
解释： which 叫作关系代词，在定语从句里面担任主语或者宾语。这
句话的定语从句 there are more job opportunities 已经是完整的句子， 所以把 which 改 成 where ， where 是关系副词，等于 in which ，在从 句里面作为状语。
改： Many young people move from rural areas to cities, where there are more educational resources and job
opportunities.
14. Many young people move from rural areas to cities, where have more educational resources and job opportunities. 解释：这里的定语从句需要一个主语，而不是状语，所以需要使用 which ，关系代词作为
定语从句的主语。
改： Many young people move from rural areas to cities, which have more educational
resources and job opportunities.
15. Many people do not understand that how important it is to protect wild animals. 解释：使用带疑问词 how 的宾语从句，不需要 that 。 使用普通的宾语从句，就把疑问词 how 去掉。
改： Many people do not understand how important it is to protect wild animals. 改： Many people do not
understand that it is important to protect wild animals.
16. The number of Australian tourists increased to 20 thousands.
解释： hundred ， thousand ，million 这样的单词，前面有数字的时候， 仍然使用其单数形 式。 改： The number of Australian tourists increased to 20 thousand.
17. It seems reasonable for government to restrict the use of fresh water to protect the environment.
解释： government 是可数名词，单数形式的前面需要冠词 the 改： It seems reasonable for the government
to restrict the use of fresh water to protect the environment.
18. When the river polluted, fishes would die 解释：这里的污染是指河流被污染，需要使用 被动语态。
改： When the river is polluted, fishes would die
19. As the government ' s money is limited, which isexpected to be spent on medical services, transport and so on. 解释：这句话里面有原因状语从句，有定语从句，却没有主句。 改： As the government ' s money is limited, it is expected to be spent on medical services, transport and so on.
改： The government ' s money is limited, which is expected to be spent on medical services, transport and so
on.
20. By contrast, although the sales of apples in the UK increased slightly from one million to 5.5 million pounds in 2004.
解释：这句话只写了让步状语从句，却没有主句
改： By contrast, the sales of apples in the UK increased slightly from one million to 5.5 million pounds in
2004.
21. Too much homework makes students stressful and tired.
解释： stressful 是修饰“造成压力的事物”，而修饰“人的压力大”应该 使用 stressed 。例如 tired 修饰人，而 tiring 修饰事物。
改： Too much homework makes students stressed and tired.
22. Students who rarely watch TV may be limited to gain knowledge. 解释：知识面受到局限，没有 be limited to do sth. 这样的句型，这
是属于根据自己的中式思维想法造出来的句子。 改： Students who rarely watch TV may
be limited in their knowledge.
23. Students are easier to find jobs after graduation if they do some part-time jobs in the university.
解释：这种句式属于典型的中式思维造句。
改： Students are more likely to find jobs after graduation if they do some part-time jobs in the university. 改： It is easier for students to find jobs after graduation if they do some part-time jobs in the university.
24. Taking part in sports activities in spare time can decline the stress at work. 解释： decline 是不及物动
词，这里需要使用及物动词 reduce 改： Taking part in sports activities in spare time can reduce the stress at
work
25. Many young people decide move to cities to look for better jobs.
解释： decide 作动词
的用法是 decide to do sth. 这些动词用法在福 利课句法录屏里面有过总结。 改： Many young people decide to move to cities to look for better jobs.
26. If criminals could receive education and training in prison, they would avoid to commit crimes again after they are released. 解释： avoid 作动词的用法是 avoid doing sth. 这些动 词用法在福利 课句法录屏
里面有过总结。
改： If criminals could receive education and training in prison, they
would avoid committing crimes again after they are released.
27. As the rapid development of economy, people's living standard has improved. 解释： As 表示“因为”，
是连词，后面要接句子，如果后面接名词，应 该使用介词 due to ，或者 because of 。 改： Due to the rapid development of economy, people's living standard has improved.
28. Children who lack of parents' love and care may become sensitive and introverted.
解释：lack是及物动词，后面没有
of
of。lack作名词的时候后面才有
改： Children who lack parents' love and care may become sensitive and introverted.
29. If children are allowed to watch TV, parents need not to accompany them all the time. 解释： need 的
否定式有两种，作为情态动词，否定式是 need not do
sth.，作为行为动词，否定式是
do n ot need to do sth.
改： If children are allowed to watch TV, parents need not accompany them all the time. 改： If children are allowed to watch TV, parents do not need to accompany them all the time.
30. Travelling abroad can broaden children's horizons and have a better understanding of foreign customs and culture.
解释： have a better
abroad 不一致。
understanding of 和前面的主语 travelling
改 ： Travelling abroad can broaden children's horizons and they will have a better understanding of foreign
customs and culture
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